A quick addition to stream of consciousness POV Part 7
6/5/2025 last few days have been working through random words given by other subs at Edith Bow's Marvelous POV workshop
Part 7 of A Good Teacher Points To Their Life and in this, YOU see You; THE ROOM -- FROM Edith Bow’s SoC HOP WORDS decanted by Edward Marlo Ruiz of Pine Box Readings & poetatowritingcollective: pepper, lighter, guard Don’t pretend to know what happened, don’t let your PARENTS fear infest the miracle of your story, your cosmos, which exists THIS once and only for you (IT) doesn’t need inherited ignorance to besmirch your carefully constructed WORLD, suspended here among 8 BILLION +stars you’d heard he/she was a trickster, but otherwise no communication would happen, you’d heard she/he would give you exactly what you asked for, and SOMETIMES if you were honest about ‘just passing’ thru this life entering through one door, crossing THE ROOM and exiting through the other, THEY would give you, what you needed while passing through AND you asked a friend of a friend who saw your desperation, who referred you to a Padrino, who referred you to a Manbo Who looked at what your eyes said you wanted and took you behind the curtain and over tea told you of Legba and Eshu and Elegua and Elegbara what to do and what not to then off to the crossroads, behind the racetrack MIDNIGHT, and you let your GUARD down, despite the rustle in the bramble, the hoot in the tree, and The CREEK/CREEK sounding like footsteps, outside your childhood bedroom door, a CREEK/CREEK when they were sneaky so he would come, would know how desperate you were, and you left A LONG RED HOT PEPPER, the biggest cigar you could find and a LIGHTER, a bottle of rum and, a Saint Anthony candle, stuck in the mud so it wouldn’t explode FLAME FLICKERS and you asked and you asked and you asked and watched the shadows move, until the one under the CLASSIFICATION: NIGHT TREE seemed to nod in agreement despite the adventure -- you fell fast asleep when you got home and the NEXT DAY, nothing CHANGED nor the day after, or after or after until a vague disappointment settled in, and later, and later, yet it was forgotten SO WHY, you ask, ARE YOU BRINGING IT UP NOW? and we wanted to remind you this is a sort of anniversary dividable by 3, we’re sure if you care to remember and YOU’VE GOTTEN everything you wanted, everything that seemed impossible then and we’re here to REMIND YOU, to say THANK YOU For EVERY DEAL YOU’VE MADE this is what the gods, spirits, ancestors of this particular MANIFESTATION (if they’re ‘real’) want from you, an occasional and HEARTFELT appreciation.
See y’all tomorrow! Much love,
Con/Jur/d, 6/5/2025
That's very very interesting style wise
. I really like what you did. The Stream of consciousness is intriguing shows your thought process. i love how these are all so different. ivw got some brewing but i keep starting stories which get out of hand and they take up all my juice!.
this one is good work. the story is really coming out of the swirl it starts off with.
What a trip